This is perhaps too late to think about…but…
Part of me is worried that I haven’t treated my character with enough respect. That I have treated the mental illness is an overly efficient manner in which I have simply summed up the story without giving her enough of a character or depth. But how do I do all of that in less than 3 minutes?
So now I am thinking of adding a voiceover and maybe more audio inserts.
GAH. I keep having slight panics throughout this.